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by DruidDave
Sat Oct 11, 2014 9:37 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: I'm writing something really nasty.
Replies: 18
Views: 11417

Re: I'm writing something really nasty.

I haven't read any of the work you mention (yet) so I can't comment on that topic, [I have read one of Drew's short works and taken it into a different direction within my own writing. My Arc doesn't exist exclusively within the Ooniverse and so I've only shared what is in this forum so far.] I agre...
by DruidDave
Mon Jul 14, 2014 10:46 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Dark Temple.
Replies: 8
Views: 5862

Re: Dark Temple.

After a year of unexpected drama and distractions I've managed to get back to these books. This part is from book one, working title currently is "Guardians Guild" It's the point at which Tiny Ron first appears in the series. Hope those who've already read the "Dark Temple" chapters enjoy the overdu...
by DruidDave
Fri Jan 17, 2014 9:14 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Oresrati, the outpost at the end of the Ooniverse...
Replies: 9
Views: 6014

Re: Oresrati, the outpost at the end of the Ooniverse...

Yours could be a Parallel Ooniverse. :wink: :lol:
by DruidDave
Fri Oct 04, 2013 9:23 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Creative chain writing :"Dumb ways to fly"
Replies: 18
Views: 15354

Re: Creative chain writing :"Dumb ways to fly"

Start out Punk'd on a seedy space-bar;
Consumed too much o'dat Leestian Flye;
Taped to the hull of a fugitive Asp;
now's too late to be wonder'n why.

Dumb ways to fly,
The Jameson ways to fly,
Dumb ways the fly,
The Jameson ways to fly...
by DruidDave
Mon Sep 02, 2013 4:12 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Dark Temple.
Replies: 8
Views: 5862

Re: Dark Temple.

For those who are interested, I've just added chapter 3 E-Dragon; Rogue cyber ghost. on box, here is the link: https://app.box.com/s/gn4c7h619ny6vgqu20df Again, not exactly Oofic on its own, but it does tie in eventually. Also a rough work, just trying to get the basic stories out of my head and ont...
by DruidDave
Thu Aug 29, 2013 1:57 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Dark Temple.
Replies: 8
Views: 5862

Re: Dark Temple.

It's fun the way characters can evolve on their own like that. There are a couple of them I have to keep a tight reign on though or they could take over the whole story. Phallian being the most difficult to contain. I've updated chapter 28, (Vernon frog little) and found a bit of tense issues there ...
by DruidDave
Wed Aug 28, 2013 10:42 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Dark Temple.
Replies: 8
Views: 5862

Re: Dark Temple.

Thanks guys, I think the indenting sounds like a great idea. I'll definitely smooth out those tenses too. Tiny Ron only got his rank and surname while I was writing that chapter, It amused me too. :wink: Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it. sometimes it's hard to switch between reader and write...
by DruidDave
Tue Aug 27, 2013 4:13 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Dark Temple.
Replies: 8
Views: 5862

Re: Dark Temple.

Ok, the first one looks like it works. Here's a different chapter (number 28). https://app.box.com/s/zjj0g9ex4ilkmy6fwila This ones a little more cryptic in it's Oolite connection at this stage. It ties in much later with the rest of the series. They are still rough drafts so some work will be done ...
by DruidDave
Tue Aug 27, 2013 4:03 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Dark Temple.
Replies: 8
Views: 5862

Dark Temple.

This is the first attempt at linking a chapter from book two (Dark Temple) to this site.
This is probably the most Oolite specific chapter I have currently finished.
I'll add others as I finish them.
I'm happy to receive feedback.
8)

https://app.box.com/s/qkzbsjepu6izif6idz08

(I hope this works.)
by DruidDave
Mon Aug 26, 2013 9:19 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: How do I add work to this forum?
Replies: 4
Views: 3669

Re: How do I add work to this forum?

Should have something on here quicker than you can remove a tribe of trumbles.
Ok, maybe tomorrow then.
:lol:
by DruidDave
Mon Aug 26, 2013 3:39 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: How do I add work to this forum?
Replies: 4
Views: 3669

Re: How do I add work to this forum?

Thanks, I'll give it a go.
:mrgreen:
by DruidDave
Sun Aug 25, 2013 11:02 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: How do I add work to this forum?
Replies: 4
Views: 3669

How do I add work to this forum?

Hi all, I am currently working on a series of books which includes the Oolite universe. I was wanting to share a couple of rough chapters specifically in the Ooniverse for feedback/comment; but I'm a newbie to all this so if anyone can give me a few starting points I would be most grateful. (I would...
by DruidDave
Sun Jul 21, 2013 4:05 am
Forum: Discussion
Topic: Lost cloak
Replies: 17
Views: 3360

Re: Lost cloak

I'll make sure I de-cloak and say hi.
If you ever make it to a little known bar called 'The gravity well' I'll buy you a drink. 8)
by DruidDave
Fri Jul 19, 2013 11:50 pm
Forum: Discussion
Topic: Lost in Z - help with docking needed
Replies: 12
Views: 3138

Re: Lost in Z - help with docking needed

I'm curious whether you're using keyboard controls or a joystick? I just switched to a joystick after a few years using keyboard control and found that much easier than using a keyboard because you can get finer manipulation of the pitch and yaw control while still maintaining a nice smooth roll. It...
by DruidDave
Fri Jul 19, 2013 3:54 am
Forum: Discussion
Topic: Lost cloak
Replies: 17
Views: 3360

Re: Lost cloak, Fixed it!

Hey guys, After finding how to get into the code and editing and re-saving the saved game (energy bomb false to true) I thought I'd just try and write the cloak into the space it looked like it should go and re-save. When I loaded the saved game it worked. Thanks for pointing me in the right directi...